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Kane
Contributed by
Kane
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Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 10:32:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The blakness of ones heart,
Rips and tears my soul apart,
My hands are cold,
As I put your life on hold,
I don't know right from wrong,
You and I don't belong,
I do not feel love,
I have fire in my blood,
Look into my eyes,
Their hollow and blind,
I enjoy the feeling of pain,
They say I'm insane,
I'll reach into your chest and rip out your heart,
With my teeth I'll tear it apart,
I find confort in the stillness of a body at rest,
I am one with the angel of death,
My thoughts are of darkness,
I live to die, my life is hopeless,
I dream of days full of rain,
My name is Kane.
Heart and Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2002-07-29 22:32:20]
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Re: Kane
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:04:28 AM AEST
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| Very dark and tortured this one.......but very well written. |
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Re: Kane
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 03:35:03 PM AEST
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| you must really have had smeone tear your heart into many little pieces to be able to wrie like this |
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Re: Kane
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:37:33 AM AEST
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| excellent dark write, i too love rain far more than sunshine, ooooh i really love this one:) |
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Re: Kane
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:57:11 AM AEST
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a true dark write. well written.
kara |
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Re: Kane
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 11:14:13 AM AEST
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Kane,
Now that I am not delirious, I will leave comments that do your work justice. This work is lovely. I know it is rare to use that word in describing dark poetry, but your emotions are shown so well. Here it is the correct term.
My friend, we tend to stick to what is familiar. For you it seems to be a dark world of pain that resides in your head. My heart wishes for peace to become a dominant feeling in your world. Until this is achieved, continue telling us of your dark world, for it is a privelege to be your visitor.
Kara |
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