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Disease
Contributed by
Poetic_punk
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Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 08:20:59 PM in AEST
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Sweat runs down my forehead
It has been a long hard night
Like a disease these feelings spread
Convincing myself that wrong is right
Let the passion flow,
This guilt is a heavy load
A lust that comes and goes
This isn’t my first trip down this road
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2008-01-23 20:20:59]
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Re: Disease
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by ruby_dreamer on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 03:59:15 AM AEST
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| Ooohhh I like! :DD What I love about it is how it's short but packed full of meaning. Most can relate to this story if they have suffered an addiction, or a bad habit, to ease pain or stress. Definitely triggers some powerful memories when I read this. Good write! |
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Re: Disease
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by Poetic_Punk on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 08:26:40 PM AEST
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| Thank you so much for your comment rubby |
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Re: Disease
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by anonymous1212 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:26:11 PM AEST
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I really like this poem....it flows very well and is short and it describes everything perfectly.
Wonderful Job! |
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