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Mine Eyes are Shut
Contributed by
twinkletoes
on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I call from the day that is dark
I watch through a window that's closed
My love does not hear nor see me
Tears fall, as tears often do.
I reach for her heart, she veils
with anger, repose or defence
I call her name in the void
My world is a shade of dark blue.
Love why do you not hear my calling,
why do chose to turn,
where is your face my beauty?
Please listen to my words so true.
You know all the answers before asked
of the life that I hate to lead
I am in a trap of no undoing
Aren't you not in one to?
.:~*~:.I LOVE YOU:.~*~:. do you hear me?
I LOVE YOU with all of heart!
I LOVE YOU my BUTTERFLY dearest!
I'LL LOVE YOU forever with pride!
Does she hear me? Do I call in vain,
or will her eyes awaken now soon?
My hope is that she will see me
and change the flow of the tide.
I listen very carefully,
she comes with love in her heart
love that I deserve and would die for
love that is ours alone.
I call as she walks down the passage
but alas she cannot hear sound from,
the darkness I live in where,
my spirt and love are thrown.
Tears I cry are blinding
fear that I have lived through so long
has haunted this soul that is me
and hardened the love that's for you.
Yes I will love you forever
Butterfly, you who tastes through her feet
who listens to ominous words-
but not to me, that is her love ever true.
Copyright ©
twinkletoes
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2003-03-09 20:20:00]
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:32:49 PM AEST
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| .:~*~:. Oohhhh :.~*~:. |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 10:59:42 PM AEST
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wow
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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| I meant to say in my previous post .... Oh, how beautiful ... but words failed me ... sigh ... Jan |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 09:01:49 AM AEST
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| Sir...the love for this woman is clear. I am certain she feels the same toward you. I am touched deeply by this write and my wish is that you both find the happiness you both so richly deserve. Larry |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 12:33:03 AM AEST
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Thanks Larry, I hope so too!
TT |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 11:33:15 AM AEST
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| your poem is very beautiful, your love for your butterfly is true, i do believe she hears you calling, perhaps her wings are caught in one of life's thorns, keep the window of your heart opened:) hugs n' love to you and your butterfly, may the sun shine upon you both very soon, nessa |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by Merry on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 12:05:35 PM AEST
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love takes so many twists and turns - such a perilous flight for delicate hearts - a beautiful love poem -
merry |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by DreamWeaver on
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| I will always hug this to my heart ... |
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Re: Mine Eyes are Shut
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by TaintedAir on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 07:58:04 AM AEST
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| the wording you used in this is great. very sweet yet sad. i loved it! |
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