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Walking Thru' Snow
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 03:07:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walking Thru' Snow
Walking thru' snow on a crisp winters nite
thru' the clouds I can see, the pale of moon light.
The stars are not quite, yet really so clear
these times all alone, I hold oh so dear.
Feeling the touch of the snow on my face
the flakes coming down once fallen no trace.
All is so quiet, nary sound do I hear
'cept for the snow whispering soft in my ear.
The words not so clear, I don't understand
why right on my person, they've chosen to land.
Their delicate shape, bring a thought to my mind
am I really unique .........am I one of a kind.
Am I like that snow flake.... the one lit on my hand
or in life's long free fall ......can i choose where to land?
Will I land near someone, who's almost like me
who'll look at my beauty, individual to see,
Or will I alite, on the highway of life
to be salted and pushed by the plows ragged knife.
Could I land on someone ....to be brushed to the ground
will I even whisper....... will I make a sound
Does anyone care where I really land.
on highway, or person, on tree or on sand
My walk almost done, a shudder, of fear
one small soft snow flake.......... turns to a tear.
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2008-01-23 03:07:25]
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Re: Walking Thru' Snow
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by trueecho on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 04:47:17 AM AEST
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what a pretty poem and nice rhythm, but does it have to end so sad? thanks :)
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Re: Walking Thru' Snow
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 06:27:43 AM AEST
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| wow..that was absolutely beautiful. such an amazing analogy...i loved it. |
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Re: Walking Thru' Snow
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 23rd January 2008 @ 07:00:53 AM AEST
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| Great Poem brought back bad street memories but the fade as in done &over with your poem:Walking Thru' Snow: is very soft and sincere delecate as in wet paper machea(SP?) touchy--------Snowblind-Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. Jr. |
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