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If Found, Please Address: Return To Sender
Contributed by
irodethetrain2u
on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:33:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart was kept
Hidden on a shelf,
In a box,
Behind locks and bolts.
You did this out of fear.
Afraid that someone would take it from you;
That it would be lost to another.
So very far did you place it,
That in time,
Even you forgot where it was!
You did not know then,
That this item you treasured
Would be lost of your own accord.
Copyright ©
irodethetrain2u
... [
2008-01-22 05:33:13]
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Re: If Found, Please Address: Return To Sender
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by lost_again on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 05:37:15 AM AEST
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Strong write, well done.
It is hard to struggle with taking the wall down at times isn't it? Enjoyed this read. |
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Re: If Found, Please Address: Return To Sender
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 09:02:13 AM AEST
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| What a powerful write.. |
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Re: If Found, Please Address: Return To Sender
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by ruby_dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 10:41:25 AM AEST
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| Firstly, that' a bad-ass title. ^_^ As I was scrolling through I was like, "Hold up... what?" Which then of course made me click on it. And then, the subject... it touches on very sensitive wires inside me that I haven't thought of in a long time. This is a very provocative, powerful write. Good job. I love the simplicity particularly. |
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