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A Paper Boat
Contributed by
joydeep_nath
on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 01:24:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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on a rainy day
sitting on the steps of your door
if you ever watched rain water
stream by your feet;
sailed a paper boat in it,
know that-
that piece of paper
that shred of my chest
would rock and sway
trepidatiously chart its way.
Sadly, as is wont
the boat would soak
wreck and melt in course.
Its fate never meets the port.
O,How I love that boat!
O,How it breaks the soul!
Copyright ©
joydeep_nath
... [
2008-01-20 01:24:25]
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Re: A Paper Boat
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by lost_again on
Tuesday, 22nd January 2008 @ 08:30:18 AM AEST
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| A different sort of write but wow I like it. |
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Re: A Paper Boat
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by STECKS on
Monday, 28th January 2008 @ 04:15:38 PM AEST
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| I like this one yet a bit confusing but its good. |
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Re: A Paper Boat
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by diba_perfect on
Saturday, 15th March 2008 @ 07:20:58 AM AEST
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| osadharon... |
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Re: A Paper Boat
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:36:46 AM AEST
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What a sad yet beautiful and descriptive poem, beautifuly done . . .
Ben
thank you for your read and comment also. |
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