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Healing moments
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 06:34:26 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Your words touched so gentle
butterfly wings upon the soul.
Life ever changing lately,
though you rest beside me always.
You said, " dance in the rain"
knowing that I do.
Drops cleansing with the lightest touch
traveling down the skin.
Flushing the pain, wrapping nature round.
Nature is the gift, wrapping itself around
covering blanket of night,
soul softly abound.
Such is the way it is.
Captured by an essence
pure as the driving snow,
the mind becomes clear
as the crystal lake
that the drops of rain filled and made whole.
The stars blanket the heavens
you complete the ember of me.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-01-18 18:34:26]
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Re: Healing moments
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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...and your friends are thankful for you, hun! Most assuredly.
The picture of rain is brilliant and flows so well with your words. I adore what
you've done with this. There is gratitude and peace of heart inside every
word, hun. Truly beautiful. Love the quote at the end, by Quick Bear. :)
The last line is exceptional!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Healing moments
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th January 2008 @ 09:51:08 AM AEST
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Awesome graphics and even more awesome write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Healing moments
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 11:17:56 AM AEST
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a graceful and moving write and yes your friends are thankful for you also
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: Healing moments
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by farscape_prophet on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 06:47:40 AM AEST
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| And such wonderful friends you must have for them to deserve such a beautiful and wonderful work of art. Very well written. |
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Re: Healing moments
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by colinb on
Saturday, 16th March 2013 @ 04:36:22 PM AEST
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| Beautifull tribute to your friends I wish i seen the picture you use to have here. |
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