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Lost and found
Contributed by
lost_again
on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 03:23:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Rainy days, clouds gathering.
Mist forming along the hills.
Dropping to the earths grassy floor
to make lush that which died on a cold winters day.
We formed our own pain at times it seemed.
Lost in a world in constant motion.
The emptiness arriving and departing again,
as the planes lifting into the air up above.
Tiny raindrops unique
when together they can form a flood.
Water cascading down empty river beds.
Destroying everything in its wake.
Fragmented sentences, fragmented lines.
A voice on page rearranged.
Just as this life sometimes tosses us upside down.
The lesson of lost and found still remain.
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lost_again
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2008-01-18 15:23:09]
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Re: Lost and found
(User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 03:45:51 PM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery! |
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Re: Lost and found
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 04:29:14 PM AEST
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| unique write. i loved the last stanza the most. im not one that likes toread about nature or the weather, but i rather enjoyed this piece. you have a lot of talent. |
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