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a boy and a girl
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
on
Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 08:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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he holds her tight
as they sit on the bed of the truck
looking up at the stars
without a care in the world
caught up in the moment
he gets up and turns the radio on
and they slow dance all night long
he said he loved her
she said she loved him
he said he meant it
her eyes started to water and she held him closer
they saw a shooting star
they made a wish
he asked if hers came true
she yes it has
you love me and mean it
she asked if his came true
he said yes
i know what it feels like to fall in love
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Re: a boy and a girl
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th January 2008 @ 04:57:19 PM AEST
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this is a very sweet first love kinda write.. I enjoyed reading this.. very sweet!
rock on,
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Re: a boy and a girl
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 03:51:34 AM AEST
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You have a knack for allowing the reader to feel as if they are right there beside you......sharing in each emotion.
I love the simple approach you have to writing.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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