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merciful healinz

Contributed by kaedee on Wednesday, 16th January 2008 @ 05:59:37 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

how can my heart
be so damn demandin?
i can barely hear its cries
but i kno its worth havin
never had to look 4 him
he was the last man standing
i took everything in
and all of which he chose to hand me
his feelings took me high,
but we made a secure landin
i called onto his soul
and told him he could have me
showed him how he could have me
and then i let him have me
but then he couldn't have me
because he couldn't handle me
it was all to the fullest
it was apples n strawberries
hard like a jollyrancher
juicy like red cherries
variety like candy
and sweet like peaches
he couldn't fathom my worth
so i killed him wit my features.
gave him a couple of seisures
burned him with my words
and left him to his lesions.
went to the preacher
and confessed all my reasons
a rush of merciful healins
wen i walked out the church
with a smile of completion.
but wait. there was more
knockin at my front door
an expression
his confession
lettin me kno he was still sore.
and im like sure.
u kin change a outfit
but u can't change
that act that u already wore.

-kaedee

Copyright © kaedee ... [ 2008-01-16 05:59:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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