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Where a child used to play.
Contributed by
gribba
on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Where a child used to play.
A doll that cries
and says mommy
sits on a shelf,
on a wall,
in an empty room,
where a child
used to play.
Now the child is gone
and all that remains
is the tears and
Blood...
from her father’s
drunken anger.
Copyright ©
gribba
... [
2003-03-09 10:30:00]
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 11:23:13 AM AEST
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| How anyone could do ths to a child.....your words are so direct.....well written....I hope he gets the help he needs.....all too late though... |
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 02:57:50 PM AEST
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well written and direct, addresses a very serious problem
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 03:49:06 PM AEST
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Grimma, this is so sad, but so beautifully written..
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 02:47:32 PM AEST
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| the imagination that sparks when reading this simple, yet powerful poem, speaks volumes... very sad and an excellent write... blessings... |
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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| Direct, to the point, serious literature. You make quite an impact. |
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Re: Where a child used to play.
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 12:44:43 AM AEST
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Gribba, having read all your works that are on this site to date, I will comment generally.
It is great to see a writer that does not let his reader off lightly, all works are thought provoking, to the point that I am sure there is much more behind just the meaning of the words themselves. Will look out for your future additions.
TT |
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