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I'll Kill Myself Before I Become You
Contributed by
amber_vonHorror
on
Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 04:06:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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well she had some time to kill
everyone called her a safe bet
well im betting shes not
and that razorblade looked so tempting
it almost screamed touch me
just like her wrist screamed cut me
but in a slightly different tone
and she sat all alone
stroking the blade, carved to slain perfection
as she glazed at it
with deep affection
your my best friend she giggled
and spiked her drink with a bit of sadness
turned down the houselights
and drowned it in the dark
then when she comes down
she recites that excuse in her mind
'thats ok, it was the last time'
like she does all the time
and her makeup box, her life saver
she applies her mask
a touch of blush
and eyeliner..maybe a little too much
and she stares at the mirror
staring at a stranger
the person she promised she'd never become
and its exactly what shes done
well, if no one knows
it cant hurt anyone
looks in the mirror
and finally sees no reflection
..shes only transparent.
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amber_vonHorror
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2008-01-14 16:06:13]
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Re: I'll Kill Myself Before I Become You
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 10:24:26 PM AEST
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Hey i have to say great ending, im not one for these kinds of poems you no, doom and gloom, always be happy your alive, for the breath that fills you and keeps you...
your special, and unique keep that amazing thing alive...
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Re: I'll Kill Myself Before I Become You
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by ki on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 01:13:17 AM AEST
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wow..this is pretty deep..very nice write !
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