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Wake In The Morning
Contributed by
honey56
on
Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 12:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Into this old world I do endure
From the painful prolonged
Memories
You decided to leave me with
I tolerate each and every snare
That harmfully lured me into
This trap
The plan to do me more harm
Than good
I pray for the healing of an evil
Heart
That truly live’s in the place was
Meant for your heart
While you pray a loud for my
Soul demise
I still pray on bending knee’s
I pray to the lord to make me
Strong,
To fight off the evil deeds you
Wish upon me
I would like to pray a prayer
For my oppressor
And with the ending I will bid
You a fare, oh farewell..
And I will wake in the morning
At the crack of dawn..
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-01-13 12:08:49]
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Re: Wake In The Morning
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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Glad it's fiction and thanks for saying so.
Great writing.
huggs,
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Re: Wake In The Morning
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by law_glen18 on
Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 12:29:17 PM AEST
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Awesome, brilliantly written and a easy flow with a plot that stretches through the boundaries of modern writing.
Loved it; keep up the awesome writing!!! |
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