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Angel Dust
Contributed by
law_glen18
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Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 11:35:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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You fill my life with happiness
With those beautiful little hugs
The sweet little smiles
Your funny fear of bugs
Your happy little dances
And your powerful "puppy eyes"
That always make me give in
Even more so when you cry
You are made of sugar
Your tears are like angel dust
Your smiles are the sunrise
Were you gone i'd be lost
My life would never be the same
If i never saw your twirl
You'll forever have my love
My sweetest angel, my little girl
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law_glen18
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2008-01-13 11:35:39]
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Re: Angel Dust
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th January 2008 @ 12:15:22 PM AEST
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Very beautifull.
Awesome write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Angel Dust
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by MemeCaroline on
Monday, 14th January 2008 @ 11:22:06 AM AEST
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Re: Angel Dust
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by Whisper on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 09:47:36 AM AEST
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Bravo what a joyful little write. The up lifting tempo and the rhythmic flow is good and the words chosen to have the reader feel the love and joy that your little girl brings you . Thanks fer sharing
Whisper
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