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the place where i go
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 06:04:02 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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it's takes a long drive to get there
out in the middle of no where
out here you wont find the glow of neon lights
just the stars and the moon shining ever so bright
at night you won't hear the noise of busy city streets
just the crickets chriping a lullaby that sounds so sweet
when you go for a walk you'll realize that your not walking on concrete
just dirt and gravel under your feet
i just love the smell of freedom in the air
and the fact that i have plenty of time to spare
i come here quite often to escape the stress of the everday mess
and no one will ever know the place where i go
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Re: the place where i go
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 04:05:57 AM AEST
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I live in the country in a valley with a small river running near my house. At night thre is no sound but for the crickets and no lights but the stars and moon so I can relate to this write of yours in a very special way. It is as if I am standing with you in spirit as I read your words. Again it's the simple and honest approach to your writing that touches me.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: the place where i go
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by UnknownLegend on
Thursday, 24th January 2008 @ 12:59:03 PM AEST
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| And you shouldn't tell anyone where that place is. My place is in my mind and sometimes in my dreams. I've written about it quite a lot because as you take on more in this life ........ that's all you have to withdraw to. Enjoy your freedom while you can..... Write on !!!! david |
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