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Two Hearts, One Destiny

Contributed by AyumiCherry on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 11:13:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The sun light shining on your hair

with me, you'll never be alone

is what you said

with a glimpse of hope

a romantic kiss

and your eyes full of passion

thats what i strive for

i love you

i need you

i can't live without you

i remember it all clearly

those words just wouldn't stop repeating in my head

we both knew the truth

we knew it wouldn't last forever

i knew you would slowly fade away

i knew i would have to say goodbye someday

but you made me a promise

and i can't let you forget about it

the good times, the hard, and the bad

our friendship

our love

you're a part of me

you'll always be in my heart

i just don't want to feel this pain anymore

i don't want to loose you

don't you see

our destiny's our intertwined

you can't fight fate

because true love never really dies

you can't just forget about everything

no matter how hard you try to move on

something tells you not to

something gives you the strength

to keep on trying

to keep on fighting

for love

even if the one you love doesn't love you back

the stories of love and loss

will always continue

they never really come to an end

because the end is just like a new beginning

Copyright © AyumiCherry ... [ 2008-01-12 11:13:13]
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Re: Two Hearts, One Destiny (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 08:27:45 PM AEST
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hey, welcome to the site ayumi, lovley first write here, good pace to it and a real heartfelt emotion, im not usually one for love poems but someing about it just caught me, its really lovely, great first write..

keep it up!!!

zenith66

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