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my dear friend
Contributed by
ribbons_and_lace09
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Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 03:11:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i've thought about what you said,
about how no one cares and how you wish you were dead,
i dont know where to start,
what im about to say comes from the heart,
your the one person that keeps me strong,
when everyhings gone wrong,
you pick me up when im down,
you make me smile when i frown,
yeah we've been though hell and back,
do you remeber my first asthma attack?
so you see my dear friend,
what you said was not true,
becuase i do care about you,
frome the begining to the end.
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Re: my dear friend
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by needledancing on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 07:04:12 PM AEST
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| Wonderful...to tell someone you trully care about them is the true nourishment of friendships...our friends are our gold. Excellent write. |
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Re: my dear friend
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 20th January 2008 @ 04:09:26 AM AEST
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Even without knowing you personally, I can tell you are a sweet soul and a heaven sent friend to those whose lives you touch.
This was beautiful and soooo caring.
Very well done once again
Roses
Larry |
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