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What's Up?
Contributed by
LilMissPoetry
on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 07:22:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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What happened? What's wrong?
Our friendship used to be like a queen and her throne.
Rich. Fun. Crazy. Dominant.
But now it seem like it has become less prominent.
As in a queen without riches,
As in a wound without stitches.
Poor. Boring. Infected.
But one of us wrecked it?
Or was it full of misunderstanding?
Our friendship used to be as active as a volcano ready to erupt,
But all I got to ask is: What's up?
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LilMissPoetry
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2008-01-11 07:22:56]
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Re: What's Up?
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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| Nice poem |
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Re: What's Up?
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by needledancing on
Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 07:25:03 PM AEST
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| Well done and welcome to YPDC..friendship here seems to be trully lasting and sounds like you have lots of talent to brighten up the pages.... |
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