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Revolving Around A Bleeding Heart

Contributed by wretched_reflections on Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:05:03 PM in AEST
Topic: obsession

I'll tie you to me with the entrails of your god
And bind you to my writhing sanctuary
To make you my mo(u)rning idol
I'll become your new sun, cry for me baby
The world you knew has perished
And I have gorged on it's screaming offspring
Just as you have disgorged them from you bleeding lips
Close your eyes for awhile,
Maybe after I revolve you won't want to die
Have I galvanized your love yet?
Cry for me baby
The world you knew has perished
The look in your eye, you're waiting for the night
You'd rather wallow in the sepulcher I've never made you look upon
Than force your gaze up at the dawn
Whore.
Those eyes I've longed to behold
Now disfigure a passion inhaled
And blown away without remorse
Shut those sores for awhile
Say goodbye, you'll never see any of this again
This paradise I've built,
Just for you to bleed all over, you're ***** filth
You were the heart of this womb,
The child cut open and left to die
Now I leave my heart behind to freeze to death.

A smile splits the ice.

Copyright © wretched_reflections ... [ 2008-01-10 15:05:03]
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Re: Revolving Around A Bleeding Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by SmokinJoeEvil on Friday, 11th January 2008 @ 03:37:17 AM AEST
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Seemed somewhat like an excuse for shocking ideas to be written all together. It makes me wonder if even you know what it means in an overall sense. Oh... and is the use of the word "paradise" supposed to be sarcastic?

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