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The Darkness of Shadows
Contributed by
ki
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Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 01:12:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Kiss me I am empty
Frozen to the touch
Dead to the world around me
And hurting very much
All I see is darkness
No more room for light
Running low on motivation
As I'm screaming through the night
Kiss me I am empty
Nothing left to see
Anything that could've been
Has dissapeared with me
All I see are shadows
Hiding from the light
Pointing while they laugh at me
Still screaming through the night
Copyright ©
ki
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2008-01-10 01:12:09]
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Re: The Darkness of Shadows
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by gribbs on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 01:45:20 AM AEST
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| Quite a deep write...most of us feel this way once in a while, during the many milestones of our lives...the secret is to accept the talent you have, and carry on... |
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Re: The Darkness of Shadows
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 03:10:03 AM AEST
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Very emotional poem, i hope youre feeling better now, anyway thats not to detract from the fact that its a lovely rhyme scheme and nice choice of words, these shadows haunt us all once in a while, dont let yourself get down, thers always someting good to look to, weather its just the fact that your alive...
see you later!!!
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