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The Foulest Deed, The Deepest Syn
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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when was the last time
that you were this frightened?
i know you're afraid
i can smell your fear
running down your leg
do you think that your tears
or pleas can change what you've done?
do you think
that any empty promise you make
will make any difference, now?
NO
you have crossed the line
you have sinned
you must pay for your crime
i'm going to kill you
you know that don't you?
you deserve no less
i couldn't just let you get away
with what you've done
everytime our paths would cross
i would curse myself for not destroying you
what?
what's that?
what have you done?!?!
how dare you be so aloof
so...so...oblivous to your atrocity?!?!
you really don't know, do you?
well, i'll tell you
but then i'm going to finish this
i can't bear to be near you any longer
you are about to die
because you have wallowed in the dead glow
of the most putrid sin
you sonofa*****
YOU TAPED OVER MY SOAP OPERA!!!
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-03-09 00:00:00]
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Re: The Foulest Deed, The Deepest Syn
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 12:18:49 AM AEST
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| lmao, death is too good for them |
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Re: The Foulest Deed, The Deepest Syn
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 12:22:50 AM AEST
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| roflmao!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: The Foulest Deed, The Deepest Syn
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:06:25 PM AEST
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lol Roy this was great very creative with a surprise ending. Keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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