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Say Goodbye.
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 07:39:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Little girl, please don't cry
There is always a softer side.
Don't hide away your lonely heart,
don't leave it alone in the dark.
Little girl, why are you so sad?
What broke your heart? What was so bad?
A love was lost, though a battle fought,
He was not the love that you sought.
Little girl, ignore this icy chill,
That creeps upon your heart and kills.
Little girl, silent are your desperate cries,
It is time to let go, say goodbye.
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MissTeenSuicide
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2008-01-08 19:39:21]
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Re: Say Goodbye.
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by ki on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 12:16:01 AM AEST
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nicely done..i enjoyed reading this !
ki |
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Re: Say Goodbye.
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by Sparkz16 on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 01:45:02 AM AEST
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| i really liked this this is a good write |
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Re: Say Goodbye.
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 10:08:08 AM AEST
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| An excellent write write..I truly enjoyed reading this.. |
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Re: Say Goodbye.
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by MemeCaroline on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 07:41:19 PM AEST
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| Good write, but so sad. |
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Re: Say Goodbye.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:09:39 AM AEST
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Nicely put together.
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