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Sarah went looking for God in Mexico
Contributed by
Franciswolf
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Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 03:46:31 PM in AEST
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Sarah went down to Mexico.
To Mexico?
To Mexico.
Said she was looking for God.
In Mexico?
In Mexico.
Whoa, did she find him?
Yeah, found him in San Francisco.
In San Francisco?
Yeah, San Francisco.
Thought she was looking in Mexico.
Yeah, but it was San Francisco.
San Francisco?
Yeah, San Francisco.
I thought she believed in Jesus.
That’s who he was.
Jesus?
Yeah, Jesus.
Don’t you think we should tell someone?
That it was Jesus?
Yeah.
Nah, that’s no fun.
She said he was bald and weighed a few.
Sounds like Buddha.
It was Buddha,
He was that guy too.
I thought he was Jesus?
He was Jesus,
He was just Buddha too.
This is going to ***** people off.
What people off?
All people off.
How’s it going to ***** people off?
People get ***** off.
They get ***** off?
I think I said it enough.
I don’t get your point of view.
My view?
Your view.
Well it don’t get you.
What else can you say about this?
About my view?
Not your view.
Well that’s all it is.
So you’re saying there’s God in everyone?
No it’s everyone.
Yeah everyone.
Well don’t you think you ought to tell someone?
Tell someone?
Yeah everyone.
Nah, that’s no fun.
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Re: Sarah went looking for God in Mexico
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 04:59:43 PM AEST
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Congradulations on 100.
You hit the jake pot with this very powerfull, true write.
More like this please.
big huggs, luv, smiles,
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Re: Sarah went looking for God in Mexico
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by Spike on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 08:15:49 PM AEST
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Tres cool. I was pulled into the realism of the dialogue and loved the concluding remarks. Subject matter and "message" was way up my alley. A fitting century post.
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