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Shortcomings of Faith
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 03:16:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I've asked the spring time for life
finding nothing in this death
The goddess is warning
and the wind burn continues
Sliver strings of translucent perfection
The embroidery of frost marks gainst
The hollow transformation continues
No strength found within peace of mind
Through the looking glass it's clear
it is time to rest these tattered eyes
Forsaken are these thoughts of mine
The night terrors continue, unable to dream
Does the cold eclipse my desires?
My silent wishes go unheard, forsaken
and the great sun disk mocks onward
This false warmth will not thaw time
My candle flickers, I the widower
The strings are wailing a siren's call
This earth grows more chilled
The fog of breathe consumes
How belief falters
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Vampire_Slander
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2008-01-06 15:16:08]
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Re: Shortcomings of Faith
(User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 06:55:23 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write..It is truly wonderful.. |
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Re: Shortcomings of Faith
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by Kellros on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 07:10:31 PM AEST
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| Very well written! |
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