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Ventriloquistic Heart
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 03:31:06 PM in AEST
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Ventriloquistic Heart
My heart throws its voice
into my head
and gives me cause
to wonder ~
...
If I manage to control it
is it weak? Or…
Does its strength lie, simply
In that it lets me?
Does it make me listen
to its whispers? Or…
Does the world fall silent
that it might be heard?
It tends to stray away
from ever shouting,
though known to change
its tone a time or two.
When it does, I’m forced
to reconsider
what course of action
I’m meant to pursue.
...
My heart throws its voice
into my head
and gives me cause
to wonder ~
what if...
...
it stopped
~ Nazmythian ~
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
... [
2008-01-05 15:31:06]
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 03:36:56 PM AEST
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Excellent enjoyable read..
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 04:05:30 PM AEST
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Gosh Nazzy,
You out did yourself with this remakable write.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 05:25:21 PM AEST
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I've never read your work before but after reading this that'll have to change, what an amazing write, and an ending so ingeniously abrubt that it almost makes your jump, and really consider how important that little voice may be, youve really got a talent my freind,
sometimes i cant find the right words for comments but this was someting special,
fabulous!!!
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 11:40:44 PM AEST
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| An incredible piece and reflective of how that inner voice can often be heard or not and yes what if it ever stopped....wonderful words I shall ponder indeed. |
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 03:36:32 PM AEST
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very creative and clever, beautifully written
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by MemeCaroline on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 02:58:32 AM AEST
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| Very interesting. I very much enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 5th February 2008 @ 07:34:41 AM AEST
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"My heart throws its voice
into my head
and gives me cause
to wonder ~"
Absolutely. All the time!
And if it stopped what would we be but passionless, emotionless and ruled by logic. The voice of the heart is anything but straightforward, and it is how we listen to it that can make us who we are.
This is a beautiful and focused write with a pared-down feel that takes you straight to the heart (pardon the pun!) of the matter.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Ventriloquistic Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th March 2009 @ 07:23:15 AM AEST
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very good indeed and the ending was great.
-phil |
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