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......You've gone.....
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 02:06:07 PM in AEST
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Where to begin,
There is a guy like my twin.
We are one,
Except I am a daughter and he a son.
He says to me...
"...I love you Stacey and I can't imagine my time without you..."
I ask him...
"...Are you drunk?"
He replies...
"...No, I had a moment of clarity..."
He takes me by such surprise,
That he feels the need to apologise.
I say it does not sound like my Ryan, but I love him,
How could I not, when he's like my twin.
He thanks me for help with his depression,
But he forgets we shared that depression.
His parting remark before an abrupt bye....
"...You've gone now twin and lover, and its gonna be hard without you being by my side..."
He never let me say my bit, not even a bye.
DP
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Re: ......You've gone.....
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 03:30:50 PM AEST
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This story is deep,,
God Bless!!! |
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Re: ......You've gone.....
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by emystar on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 04:26:43 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
Take care.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: ......You've gone.....
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 02:14:16 PM AEST
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" its not my normal style so i apologise already lol " . . .
Apology not accepted, lol. this is beautifuly deep and touching, with an abundance of
true warmth, and fragile sincerity . . . very lovely writtng . . .
Ben
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