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A room full off women holing bananas
Contributed by
harmony
on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 01:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The colour in a womans eye
is not the only fruit
Each a stand for fruit
Copyright ©
harmony
... [
2008-01-05 13:06:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A room full off women holing bananas
(User Rating: 1 ) by MemeCaroline on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 07:46:10 PM AEST (User
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I am glad to see you gave Haiku a go. Just so you know the next time, Haiku is three lines, first and third lines are 5 syllables and the second line is 7 syllables . I hope this helps. |
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