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my life
Contributed by
Don205
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Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 10:06:06 AM in AEST
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WOW! Life! ……. _____________________________________________
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____________________this is how I feel. “Honestly” life is so chaotic right now. I want to remember what it feels like on solid ground. Can anyone tell me?
“In the morning I wake up and in the night I sleep… since the day that I was born.. repeat, repeat, repeat..”
Do you ever wonder…. [you finish this sentence]…what if…..how come…..what happened….Am I making sense yet? I doubt it. But this is how I feel.
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Re: my life
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by Tot on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 01:10:58 PM AEST
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| I actually love this, though not long, it asks all the questions I think we all ask! ~Tot~ |
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Re: my life
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 02:14:40 PM AEST
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I agree with Tot lol
i wasnt planning on reading it but then i thought what the hell... i was nicely surprised by it...thats the 3rd this evening... |
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Re: my life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th January 2008 @ 03:12:40 AM AEST
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Hey you!!! :D
I just read the blog you posted where Kandice mentioned your poem here.
I was going to comment on the blog and tell you how poetically you speak,
but then I came here and voila!!! It's a poem. :)
There is a depth to this that cries with familiar voices ...
SOOOOOOOOOOOO glad you joined!!! Welcome, poet. Welcome. :)
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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