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Quicken
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 09:27:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pink Floyd:Pulse
breathe the night
embrace the moon
kiss the sky
—just don’t ask why
squeeze the soil
listen to wind
drink the rain
—but I can’t explain
soar with birds
howl to wolves
commune with land
—then you’ll understand.
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-01-05 09:27:12]
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Re: Quicken
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 12:30:01 PM AEST
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Dont no if it is just the picture but,I think this is an excellent pieace of work
God Bless!! |
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Re: Quicken
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 03:24:52 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Quicken
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 02:31:25 PM AEST
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'But I can't explain' ?
I think you explained perfectly,
Den |
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Re: Quicken
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 04:39:52 PM AEST
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Wow, Mr spike. Pulse, indeed!! So much said in so few words. I am
super impressed! The first stanza really sets a pace that you adhere
to throughout the next two. but damn! The advice in it is staggering!
To be alive. REALLY alive ... yes this is to taste the driving thrill
of the pulse of everything. And you, dear poet have captured the
excitement of a simple moment so flawlessly, I could feel the soil,
hear the wind and taste the rain you so perfectly spoke of.
Bravo! And more please ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Quicken
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 09:55:51 PM AEST
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| The nature of understanding our nature is put perfectly to the maestro's music. Excellent Spike. |
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Re: Quicken
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by brew on
Wednesday, 6th February 2008 @ 01:12:29 PM AEST
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Its .as an abstract draw i did
Magnificent
How do you do it?
Sorry I have looked , too deep............".SIGHS"
Ok well the rest i will leave to an PM, if interested to know......Beauty there, simply beauty
brew~ |
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Re: Quicken
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:45:24 AM AEST
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| I am fascinated. . . what really beautiful expression & a superb conveyance of true insight. peace. elle |
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