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after working in
Contributed by
JohnYamrus
on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 05:37:49 AM in AEST
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after working in
the yard
this morning,
my hands smell like tomatoes…
they smell like grass…
they smell like dirt
and weeds…
they smell like
an old rubber garden hose…
they smell like mulch
and sweat
and gasoline…
they smell like
my father…
and his father…
and his.
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JohnYamrus
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2008-01-05 05:37:49]
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Re: after working in
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 08:52:06 AM AEST
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sound like musk to me..smile
Nice write... |
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Re: after working in
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 02:19:40 PM AEST
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sounds like the smell of my boyfriend most days after work....
...strange to think i could miss such a smell after moving 5000miles away from him...
i liked this very much...captured the whole essence of in so few words.. fantastic |
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Re: after working in
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by disgracefully-yours on
Wednesday, 30th January 2008 @ 09:39:48 AM AEST
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| beautiful, reminded me of one of my favourite poems, Digging by Seamus Heaney. good bit of yard work is nice and humbling. |
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