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Love is when...
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 01:21:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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love is when you always look at me
but never talk to
love is so amazing
especially
when it it with you
you make me wanna shout to the heaven
whenever you make me happy
you love me when no one else did
love is when you met someone who is so
unique.. so unique that he is better than you dream
love is when you see the right person
but to speechless to say anything to them
you are breathless around them
but when they walk by
you always think of bad things of
when you do talk to them
i always have a thing for you
too bad you do not notice me in the crowd that i am in
otherwise i would be noticeable
you claim to see me in the crowd
but never put me out
to see me better
you say that you care about me
then show it to the world
do not just show it to me only
love is when you have that feeling whenever you are near
but always wonder what it would be like if you would have
taken a chance to show them who you really are
love is when.....
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2008-01-04 13:21:07]
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Re: Love is when...
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by elle on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 02:41:34 PM AEST
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Dear PreciousKitten,
A very heartfelt and precious write.I have found it serves me well to proof & proof & proof again, thereby leaving no room for error in interpretation.Write on...elle. |
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Re: Love is when...
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 08:45:41 AM AEST
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| Love Hurts Love Scares Any Heart Love Does For Strong Enough-Great Poem:Love is when:Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs Lord,Denver L. Jr. |
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