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As Time Passes
Contributed by
Karlee14
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Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 07:31:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Tick tock tick tock
Echoes in my ear
Slowly nearing the demise
Of once encountered fears.
Doubt fading
Consciousness slipping away
The feeling of safey
For one more hour could you stay?
The insanity of remembrance
Through the lie
As time passes
I don't want to say good-bye.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
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2008-01-04 07:31:54]
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Re: As Time Passes
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 08:41:29 AM AEST
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This really put you in a happy poetic state..lol
Well, all in all is it an excellent write!!! |
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Re: As Time Passes
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by elle on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 12:01:27 PM AEST
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| does time pass slowly as we feign release & relinquish our good-byes...crawling fitfully, alone, toward our fear of good-bye...our hearts clinched tight trying to give good-bye its' freedom, its' place in time & space...becoming one with our by-gones as they become an enity unto themselves...?so we behold a lose, a gaping hole. small wonder we hold on, sane or insane... whatever state of mind will suffice to carry us through...the confines of our human souls do not release with ease what seems so, so, sooo real.& so the time passes on slowly. ever slowing until we recognize the contortionist left behind...as ourselves & embrace this all,even the emptiness, as blessing...bless our hearts.elle. |
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