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All I Could Do
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Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:59:15 PM in AEST
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I lift up my soal from this pile....This mess around me made from your denial....I fell for you and threw my love at your feet....And all you could do was tease me about my defeat....
Are you happy for telling me no....Because the way you rejected me made me feel low....Did I not stay down at your feet and pleed for understanding....
But your mind was set....But I kept telling you....Remember how we met....It was pure,real and that''s what you always wanted....But somehow you seem so confused, Trust me....I'm not amused....
I always promised you that I'd understand, No matter what....But something inside you must be deeply cut?
I know you must turn me away....But always remember what happened this day....I was on my knees for you, Will you marry me....It was all I could do?
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Re: All I Could Do
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by ki on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 01:22:26 AM AEST
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| oh how sad... |
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Re: All I Could Do
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 03:33:33 AM AEST
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Love will bring you to your knees!! But I hope you truly love open her heart before it is to late!!
God Bless!!!
And Pray About it!!! |
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