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Alone
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 08:48:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Alone on this road
For so long
Never thought anyone will come by
Loneliness creeps in sometimes
Wrapped around so tight
That I think I am going to die
Once a while
A special friend does come along
That makes my heart wonder
If that is the special someone
I have been waiting for
I have been longing for
Reality flashes it red lights
Putting a stop to my dreams
Knowing a smile is just a friendly smile
Knowing a hug is just a show of affection
Knowing a kiss is no more than a touch
I continue my journey on this road
Alone
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2008-01-03 20:48:19]
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Re: Alone
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by law_glen18 on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 09:15:37 PM AEST
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If i have discovered one thing in my life it is that we are never truly alone. Chip up and keep pumping this brilliant writing. Two thumbs up!!!
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Re: Alone
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 02:45:25 AM AEST
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| Road-Highway To Hell-long-Its Been A Long Time Been A Long Time A Lonely Loney Time-anyone-Is There Anybody Out There,Is There Anybody Out There?-Loneliness-Loneliness Is Cleanlyness Cleanlyness Is Godlyness Just Like Me-Wrapped-Wrapped Around My Finger-Die-Are You Scared?-while-Hey Wait I Got A New Complaint-friend-Ridders On The Storm Riders On The Storm In To This House Were Born Like A Loner On The Road In This World Were Born my Friend Depends On You Killer On The Road His Brain Scrimmin Like A Toad-heart-Heartbreaker Dreammaker Dont Come A Round Me-special-I Been Locked In You Heartshape box-waiting-My Cinnamin Girl-longing-You Look Wounderful Tonight-red lights-Stop Let Me Be-dreams-Smashing Your Dreams-smile-With Teeth-hug-Stranglehold-kiss-Blow Me A Kiss And Blow Me Away-journey-Country Roads Take Me Home To The Place Were I Belong-Alone-Spanish Caravan-Great Write try to put this together and I agree and feel kinda like the same.great poem:Alone:Comment From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD dENVER l. jR. |
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Re: Alone
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by disgracefully-yours on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 01:56:53 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to that feeling of isolation there sometimes, it's tough to deal with but things always get better i promise you. In your case it has inspired an amazing poem, you have a really good writing style and the ending is so powerful. |
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