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Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times
Contributed by
little_genna
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Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I do not mean to scorn you,
But I did warn you.
I told you...
I love you...so many times...
Even in so many rhymes...
That you thought of as nothing more than silly lines.
Could I really settle for what was on offer?
Would it start to eat at me, become a bother?
I am not the kind of lady,
That could settle to be a wife with a baby.
You encouraged me to spread my wings,
Are you sure you are ready for what it brings?
I may grow without you,
Are you ready for that too?
You did not believe I would go,
Is that why it came as such a blow?
You finally realised what you had,
After being told so many times, you foolish lad.
DP
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2008-01-03 10:28:47]
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Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times
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by mrpeanut64 on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 02:37:57 PM AEST
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| I think it makes perfect sense and was well written. |
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Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:02:39 AM AEST
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Make perfect sense & A perfect write..
I enjoyed reading this..
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Re: Rhymes. Lines. All in wrong times
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 01:21:23 AM AEST
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I may grow without you,
Are you ready for that too?
my favourite lines...sublime, coming of age poetry!
Cheers,
U. |
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