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Time Has Grown Old
Contributed by
honey56
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Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 08:52:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The new year has came in
But, all is the same
Nothing changes
Still the cheating, stealing,
Killing
Only a bit slicker!!
The graveyard still filled
With
All the broken hearted
Bones stack to the top
Pouring over the sides
Waiting to be mend
Hearing cries scream out
But silence said hush
Your screams will not be heard
All your skeletons just followed
You through the doors of 2008
The new year just begun but
Already It’s old..
Copyright ©
honey56
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2008-01-02 08:52:11]
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Re: Time Has Grown Old
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by mr_alleycat on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 11:26:20 AM AEST
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| I liked this alot. It speaks of so many things :) |
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Re: Time Has Grown Old
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by kfghockeyfan on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 04:02:32 PM AEST
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| Alittle bit deflating for anyone that parties at New Years. But of course it holds true. Truth throughout |
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Re: Time Has Grown Old
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by little_genna on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:51:24 AM AEST
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its true in the most part for me and thats definitely how i felt about the last 2 years. but this year i made a big change... i moved sides of the world. leaving everything i know back in england... although some of my skeletons have tried to follow me... life is made easier by not having to answer a phone or an email... always have the excuse of ooopse time difference sorry i missed you ..
i really enjoyed the flow of this poem. but i'm not sure about this part
Pouring over the sides
Waiting to be mend
im not sure if that was just a spelling error but i felt that it kind of put a halt to your flow. i hope i havent offended you by saying that but wanted share an observation....however, i really loved this..great job! |
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