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Now Im Lonley Incomplete
Contributed by
nicoleshwd
on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 06:27:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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standing in the
back of the line
slowly dieing
dont no which way
is foward or back
and i want to no
how long will it last
you swept me off my feet
but now im lonly incomplete
i have never loved like this
in all my life
never will i dream again
nor will my sun shine
i dont no what to do
bacause today i lost you
you left me here
broken on the ground
wishing we we'd of last
but nothing is found
the way you looked at me
on that sad day
we cried togather
then you left me astray
you swept me off my feet
but now im lonly
incomplete
i have never loved like this
in all of my life
never will i dream again
nor will my sun shine
i dont no what to do
because today i lost you.
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2008-01-02 06:27:33]
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Re: Now Im Lonley Incomplete
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by Anesthetic on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 10:00:13 AM AEST
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nice write, i liked the way it built up, very good.
Keep up the good work
~Charlie~ |
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Re: Now Im Lonley Incomplete
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by blackrose233 on
Wednesday, 26th March 2008 @ 04:22:01 AM AEST
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| I know ware your coming from, this is a really nice write and I enjoyed reading it |
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