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Heartless
Contributed by
kfghockeyfan
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Tuesday, 1st January 2008 @ 10:36:27 PM in AEST
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To thee I leave
this batch of broken melodies
escaping through the walls
the walls of a heart
A heart
Lying there beating
Slowly slowing
Slowly dying
A life
slowly expiring
before a pair of eyes
Your eyes
Death
A lifelong sentence
to death, a death
a slow death
A body
Lying there
Left to rot
Without consideration
Heartless
Copyright ©
kfghockeyfan
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2008-01-01 22:36:27]
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Re: Heartless
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by Anesthetic on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 10:17:13 AM AEST
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Nice write, for your first this is pretty good, keep up the good work:)
~Charlie~ |
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Re: Heartless
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by kfghockeyfan on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 11:45:00 AM AEST
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| Actually this was written about 2 years ago for an English class along with 9 others so these first couple that I will put on here will be of them and then I'll start trying some new stuff |
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Re: Heartless
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by ki on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 01:46:52 AM AEST
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very good write!keep it up!
ki |
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