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Reach out

Contributed by bhavik on Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 01:29:10 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

God help me reach out to the thousands of emotions that seem to wander in my mind.
The other day I traveled to the far end of my mind,
I met this beautiful lady call life and thanked her for been so kind.

Mother help me reach out to the people I don’t know,
Yet there is a strange desire that I want to know.
Mother your debt is one that I cannot ever repay,
Your acts of kindness to make me what I am seem to replay.
Replayed in the form of days when you helped me walk, talk, run,
understand that this world is like a play.

My friend help me reach out to the real me which lies dormant somewhere,
I have laughed with you and cried with you,
In the whole process I seemed to have lost myself somewhere.

Dreams Oh dreams, my beautiful dreams,
It seems you have deserted me,
Did you find a kinder mind?
Dreams Oh dreams, help me reach out to the purest soul,
the one that I only see through you in my mind.

Time my greatest mentor,
Help me reach out to the last day that I have on planet earth,
So that I know that when can I fly like a cloud?
Than been a burden on planet earth.

Copyright Â© bhavik ... [ 2007-12-31 13:29:10]
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Re: Reach out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 09:22:59 AM AEST
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i can appreciate where you were trying to go but i think your focus needs to be narrower. the thoughts you were expressing in my opinion would be better if they were addressed to one person or thing. rather then addressed to god, mother, etc

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