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fading grey
Contributed by
neonfrost
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Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 08:54:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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With no direction no guiding light, we raise our heads to look above at the vast black emptiness of our world, hoping someone recognises our pain and hears our screams pulsating with fear and wonder we hope for a dream in the fading grey
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Re: fading grey
(User Rating: 1 ) by Honey56 on
Monday, 31st December 2007 @ 09:52:32 AM AEST (User
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The world has gotten where no one cares about the other person..
Very nice write..
Happy New Year!!
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Re: fading grey
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd January 2008 @ 10:02:57 AM AEST (User
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a great descriptive moving write. nicely done |
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