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Fade Away
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:04:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Under faded moon in darkened sky,she searches for her sleep
With silent screams and wasted tears for a love she couldn't keep
Each thought a new awakening,each breath a heavy sigh
As there within her fallen tears,she bids her love goodbye
Shattered pieces of her dreams lay strewn throughout her mind
All in memory of her love that left her here behind
With nothing but the shadows and the fading moon above
She dines alone in silence on the bitter after taste of love
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LovingWhispers
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2003-03-08 18:04:28]
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Re: Fade Away
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST
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Beyond beauty! I loved it
Always
Amy |
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Re: Fade Away
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 11:00:45 PM AEST
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| Again excellent work-It has the sound of a honest heart. Great work ! |
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Re: Fade Away
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:46:59 PM AEST
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| hugs |
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Re: Fade Away
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:47:30 PM AEST
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your work is so sensitive here, you have to of
lived it, to write it so well. very good piece. Crow |
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