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Among the angels
Contributed by
harlequinhoax
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Sunday, 30th December 2007 @ 03:23:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It seemed like the world stopped that day,
that day they said you were gone,
But i wouldn't acknowledge it was true,
i refused to believe anyone.
You didn't deserve what happened to you,
you were only young, in the prime of life,
why couldn't they have given you another year or two?
And delay all the pain, delay all the strife.
Everyone says you were a pretty girl,
and about how you were so brave and strong,
I know you're in a place that matches your smile now,
Among the angels, where you belong.
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harlequinhoax
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2007-12-30 03:23:01]
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Re: Among the angels
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 30th December 2007 @ 04:19:28 AM AEST
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Excellent write..Sad this had to happen!!
God Bless!!
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Re: Among the angels
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by hot-shot on
Sunday, 30th December 2007 @ 06:13:57 AM AEST
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such a nice work...
it really touched my heart...
hugs for u
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Re: Among the angels
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by Zaf_Stud on
Sunday, 30th December 2007 @ 08:15:54 AM AEST
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How sad!
Only she knows what she went through, but you are right she is now where good people dewll. People like her.
May everyone live a healthy life.
Thanks for helping us feel for her by your poem.
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