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Whisper Into Me...
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When first your whispers soothed my soul
As your breath had warmed my face
Desire ignited deep within as
Your mouth I longed to taste
To trace the smoothness of your lips
My tongue in search of yours
Liquified love found in juices
From where your whispers softly fall
Pressing up against your warmth
Eyes closed,I feel my way
Touching on our desires rush
As we tempt it with foreplay
Breasts adorned with lace of white
Rise and fall with lustful sighs
I am here and yet I'm there
Lost somewhere in your eyes
Let caressing hands so know me
As your heart so knows my soul
Breathe us in,enhance your senses
Let the passion take control
Into desires place of warmth
Fall deeper than the sea
Surround yourself within my love
And whisper softly into me
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-03-08 17:20:00]
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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nice visuals good write very passionate
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:29:55 PM AEST
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Oh my goodness, what's with the poems today?? Everyone's trying to get me all stirred up, I swear!!! Arg. Oh well, you know you've written a good poem when.........
lol :)
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 10:43:55 PM AEST
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Excellent passion in this poem. Appeals to the romantic in me-excellently done
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Re: Whisper Into Me...
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by wolfflow on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:51:25 PM AEST
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| *sighs*, this flows so easily through the mind and soul, i would love to be able to write something so good as this |
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