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Untitled
Contributed by
Spyder_Mike
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Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 12:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You will never know the pain I feel inside; deceit, guilt, betrayal, confused, angry, upset. Being mislead from one person to another. I know the feeling and the scenario played out one-two many times but the ecstasy can never express how I feel and what I want. To realize the mistakes I’ve made from being a kid to growing into a man. I know I hurt you once before and we've grown apart in relationship terms but yet still friends and I lie all my confidence in you. The one I can talk to about anything and it will remain between us but yet so much unfinished business between us. I can see it in your eyes and fell it in my heart, so many things to say but when will the time come for me to tell you.
the second chance that I’ve been waiting for you to give me and yourself. I've given you time and space and our friendship has grown tremendously and patiently I’ve waited for you and will continue to wait. For the moment to relieve the tension that has built inside of me for so long. in your eyes I see you want the same thing, but yet afraid of being let-down and broken hearted again; The fire remains with the flames scorching red hot for the chance to reconcile and start again. But when will you ever open up and roll the dice with me once more?
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Re: Untitled
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 04:48:30 AM AEST
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| I liked this a lot, believe it's great other than the grammar, which could be improved. I can relate to this a lot... waiting for that time while everything - that's life - passed by... |
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Re: Untitled
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by Kellros on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 04:48:39 AM AEST
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| I liked this a lot, believe it's great other than the grammar, which could be improved. I can relate to this a lot... waiting for that time while everything - that's life - passed by... |
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Re: Untitled
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by mr_alleycat on
Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 07:00:53 AM AEST
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Grr8 write,
Time will tell, and it seems you've grown in other ways. |
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