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Flawless love
Contributed by
lilhulk55
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Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 05:21:57 PM in AEST
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Every time I look into your eyes I lose myself in them
They're more beautiful than a priceless gem
I could hold you in my arms forever and be content
I'd buy you eternal happiness and it'd be money well spent
I wish I could take away all your pain and sadness
I can't imagine life without you, it would be madness
You take me higher than I've ever been in this world
My happiest day is when our love was unfurled
"I’LL LOVE HER FOREVER" I couldn't say it better myself
I love you more than anything, even life itself
I wish I could take you away from all this B.S. and drama
I want you with me forever, I want my kids to call you "mama"
You're the last one I think of before I fall asleep
And you're the first one I think of when I hear my phone beep
I can’t imagine leaving you, my heart wouldn’t be able to take it
But our love is in your hands, it’s whatever you decide to make it
So please say you’ll be mine, forever and always
I promise to love you for the rest of my days
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lilhulk55
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2007-12-26 17:21:57]
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Re: Flawless love
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 02:33:08 PM AEST
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Great writing and I'm sure it will be appreciated.
I' m the kindda gal that needs someone to show luv, ofcourse beutifull writes like this would be very acceptable too.
Keep up the good writing and good luck.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Flawless love
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by brew on
Friday, 28th December 2007 @ 12:43:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful title......Just member , no love is flawless...if so its boring. Love flows and movs with in.,it allowed to be with flaws....your write is just what she will picture it to be......again good post and beautiful title
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