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blue before sunrise
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 04:22:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°
if only i could turn back time
or ride a magical wave to then
said; would be that which need be
i shant sit here now wondering
wishing, longing, hoping for a tomorrow
that; is not part of this lifes design
fondly are the memories of
happier times, remembered with a
tear; down my eye alongside a smile
if i could turn around and know
again, a breath of wonder so sweet
closed; would be these eyes and this heart
would sing.
§* *§
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2007-12-26 04:22:42]
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 05:59:34 AM AEST
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we all some time say these words,
but we must look ahead to the future
and do better as we go.i like your poem very much.good work.RC. |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by Honey56 on
Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 01:35:09 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 05:03:19 PM AEST
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| beautifully written ,,we live on memories to remind us of what we have and love,,cherish the thought,, a friend in words,,craig s. meeks |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 26th December 2007 @ 11:11:57 PM AEST
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quite lovely, indeed. Our memories sustain us in the dry times. Happy holidays and a joyful 2008.
Spike |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 12:33:00 AM AEST
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I know these feelings. Great write, my friend.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 02:20:26 PM AEST
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Hey girlfriend,
awesome writing as always.
good work and hang in there 'cause we need you here.
Sorry I'm so far behing on my coments.
Luv ya girlfriend.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by mr_alleycat on
Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 07:44:57 PM AEST
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A Grr8 write Fawn,
Enjoyed loads
mr_alleycat |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by detourchick on
Wednesday, 27th February 2008 @ 05:08:03 AM AEST
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| wow really good |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 01:26:34 PM AEST
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Oh Sweetie...hang onto those memories grrl... Good to read your precious words once more.. I will have to get busy again soon... on your poetry..
Love and woofies..
Jenni |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 10:19:03 AM AEST
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Dearest Nessa,
Every one of your poems
has touched my heart deeply
in some way or another my
dear friend. Memories,
yes especially those happy
ones tend to keep us going
in our very saddest of times.
Huge huggers dear friend.
A precious write penned by
a very talented & gifted Miss~
love ya,
sue m |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 06:52:41 PM AEST
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I see you have just kept growing as a writer and indeed your heart is attached to your pen *smiles*
This moved me to actually...feel the ink that is filled with sincere emotion.
Just lovely! |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by Flex4life13 on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 07:30:50 PM AEST
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| Longing for what once was, for what could have been...that mimics my every poem it seems. Great job on this one! Remember, hindsight is a sheep in a wolf's clothing, we remember only the good moments and make the bad seem less than. |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th May 2014 @ 09:05:18 PM AEST
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Simple yet effective. Beautiful in its meaning, and haunting in its reality. Big hugs.
~Scorp |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by colinb on
Monday, 2nd June 2014 @ 01:51:31 AM AEST
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memmories we hold on to,
beautiful |
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Re: blue before sunrise
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 6th February 2019 @ 10:55:38 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful! |
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