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Tell me how

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 11:54:57 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Can you hear me
Drowning in my screaming
I don't know why I'm like this

So turn around
I can't face this
would you take my hand
can you save me, from myself?

I'm living in visions
the nightmares never end
I'm lost in the shadows of doubt
where you found me
I'm trying so hard
but I can't find a way out,
I'm crawling on my knees
I'm begging , please
can you tell me how?

I'm slipping again, out of focus
I'm trapped under the surface
I don't know why I can't breathe

So turn around
I can't face this
would you take my hand
can you save me, from this hell?

I'm living in visions
the nightmares never end
I'm lost in the shadows of doubt
where you found me
I'm trying so hard
but I can't find a way out,
I'm crawling on my knees
I'm begging , please
can you tell me how?

ooh-ooh-ooh

my focus is fractured
I'm blind to myself
this life is taking a toll on me
can you see what's become of me
I'm battered and broken
and falling apart
I feel so far away
can you hear me calling out?

I'm living in visions
the nightmares never end
I'm lost in the shadows of doubt
where you found me
I'm trying so hard
but I can't find a way out,
I'm crawling on my knees
I'm begging , please
can you tell me how?

Copyright © Forgotten_soul ... [ 2007-12-24 11:54:57]
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Re: Tell me how (User Rating: 1 )
by ki on Tuesday, 25th December 2007 @ 12:39:01 AM AEST
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i often feel this way as well

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