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Misunderstood
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 01:18:05 PM in AEST
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you make me feel blue
when i have done nothing wrong
you make me feel less of a human
because you don't respect me as a person
how i can stay here with you
knowing that you never loved me like you should have
you always says that i am a good person
then let me to let you to let me show you
what kind of person that i am
you say that i am a special kind of person
that show me some love
or at least some respect every once in a while
i have the power of a human
but i also have the stubborness of a mule
why do you ask?
because i love you and you mean the world to me
and i hope you understand what i am saying to you
if you do not, then you will regret the day
you had a chance to change your ways
love you always, bye
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Re: Misunderstood
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 02:40:50 PM AEST
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this sounds, more like a letter.
not a bad thing, that's just how i see it.
mostly the last line made me think that.
but in all honesty- i know how your feeling with this, mostly the
"you had a chance to change your ways" -part.
i'm dealing with that same type of situation. (not to sound cliched, but i know how you feel)
otherwise, i liked this a lot, and your are a great writer.
- Bethani -
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Re: Misunderstood
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by mr_alleycat on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 05:11:44 PM AEST
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Good Write,
If they diss you, they don't love you hun.
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Re: Misunderstood
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by spooky on
Monday, 24th December 2007 @ 04:18:30 PM AEST
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they know how you feel,,maybe they are just as stubborn as a mule,or they just don't care for ones feelings,,
a friend in words,,
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