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sunsets
Contributed by
jnep
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Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 09:45:39 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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as the flicker of the sunset dims the sky...
i feel like this is the time to say goodbye...
i dream about the things i wished to say or do....
how i could not be with you...
as the light dims and our hearts fade away...
i only wish it would end some other way....
as the clouds pass against us, and the light is gone...
all i can say is that you were the one....
always.... --- 610 pm, Nov 22,2007.. dedicated to nikki
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Re: sunsets
(User Rating: 1 ) by yackerz85 on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 12:54:40 AM AEST (User
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Wow. This poem is very solemn and beautiful just like the sunset you describe.
Happy Holidays
~Mark~ |
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Re: sunsets
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 04:48:25 AM AEST (User
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You sound like a male but even with further they can be placed to both all lyrics that will be typed-Sunshine Of Your Love-For I Have A Light I Think Im Happy Maby Just Dumb-Daydream Believer-as in warmth just to stand in Her rays as she shines down in the damp or cool mornings to just-Mellow Yellow.Very Good Poem Comment from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest,Denver L. Jr. Merry X-Mas &Happy New Year 2007-2008. |
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Re: sunsets
(User Rating: 1 ) by jnep on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 09:25:31 AM AEST (User
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hahaha thanks.. :) i just felt like writing this down yesterday.. :) |
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