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The Tide Roll In
Contributed by
honey56
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Saturday, 22nd December 2007 @ 01:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The tide stand tall
The wind blow strong
A clap of lightning
Strike’s with a vengeance
The thunder roar with
With a frightful loud roar
I hear a tremendous squeak
I see a of flicker of light
Totally black and silence
Follows..
The tide stand tall and began
To roll in
Taking everything back into
The sea..
To shackle it down to a watery
Grave..
Copyright ©
honey56
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2007-12-22 13:55:32]
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Re: The Tide Roll In
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 02:33:46 PM AEST
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this is amazing.
good imagery, word choice.
your an amazing writer!
- Bethani - |
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Re: The Tide Roll In
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 07:00:29 PM AEST
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I agree this is an incredible write. You took me back to the beach.
I have the greatest respect for the sea.
huggs,
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